Some of the concerns that I had with my paper was that the paper was not detailed enough. There were not any quotes in the paper so it came off sounding like I stole it from Gees study. I learned a lot from my peers reviews. We talked about how to rearrange my paper so it sounds more like my words and also where certain. I connect best with Cuddy and the reason for this is because I connect with Primary Discourse. My Primary Discourse is still with me and will always be with me as I go in to my second discourse in the future. In order for me to show a better perspective of what my paper is about I need to show quotes that support my paper and my perspective on the discourses.