The paper that I chose to go off of for the first learning outcome is my second paper. The reason for this is because the second paper that I wrote did not have a very strong written rough draft but I was able to take the work that my peers suggested and turn my paper from a terrible one to a good one. I haven’t always been the best at writing papers so when I get advice from my peers I am able to take that into account. It really helps my writing process when someone is able to locate exactly where in my paper that work is needed. I didn’t have many changes in my paper it was mostly adding in quotes and taking the information that I had and making it a little more detailed.